TCYJ 04. When You're Gone

Nice ~~~

blur? what you mean by blur ehs.

It's blur .

Plain.

eh it's too wordy seriously!

u can really shorten the titles of the sections.

and one of them, the one that talks about, "i was the one who missed you.." or wadeva is overlapping the design with its border. yeah, correct it.

then erm... yeah i recommend you add some toning to the slogan of ur design, add emphasis to those very dramatic sentences, apply different fonts too, for this u can use some cursive fonts like English. of course u can use different sizes. by how u have spaced the sentences out i can see u really made an effort to bring some creativity into ur words. but u can do more to it, so that it doesn't look wordy since u would have toned the words so wonderfully that it looks like a poem and becomes the focus.

i like the way u positioned the boxes, but u can add more colour to it.

and the posts, i dun think u should repeat "those memories.." the slogan, it looks so repetitive and maybe u can just design that slogan into the top of all the posts, not each of them. like below the "when you're gone".

yeah jiayou rock on!