I think the picture needs to be more prominent- so you can see it better.

the font is blocked by the huge mass of black 'hair'... and yea- the concept is a little odd

I like this layout a lot- good symbolism. I think that it would work much better without the caption on the pic though. The old cliche' "a picture is worth a thousand words" comes to mind. I think that pictures like this one can speak novels to people- and they mean more when each person can come to their own conclusion about the picture. Labeling it narrows the scope down too far and prevents the individual from creating their own generalizations.
(sorry for rambling)
synopsis: It would be more meaningful without the caption.