errrm.. the font colours don't really match here either..the light purple is kinda off.

yeah..i agree the font colour throws the whole layout off..

Colours don't match. The image is... er. Get rid of the words. And maybe you could have all the textboxes side by side instead of having one on top of another.. A bit weird. You from Chongfu? Me too =)

It seems awfully romantic even though I don't understand whatever's written on it. x) I don't think the 2 of you should crticize layouts without giving reasons.

I don't see what's so bad about this. Shadowmist, good that you're experimenting x)

I like both! Great work. I'm drifting through the milkwayX)

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This is beautiful. Truly romantic.

Hmm. I actually like school. The before and after part

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