Definatly take down the size of the fonts and I'm not sure if its my computer but the text box is too small for the font. This would probably change if you brought down the size.

The moving lines are a big distraction. Depending on where you have the textbox you may need to lighten the image up. I'd definatly get rid of the lines because your entry lettering is going ot be around 12 point and if its white, it will get lost. I also like the composition of the images very much, and don't want to see them disturbed by the lines.

It looks good except you should watch the text overlapping where the entries go. Because its the same color, they seem to bleed into eachother. Also, the f and l over the image show a pixilated white surrounding it.

This is definatly very cute.

Hmm... theres not too much to this which can be a good thing. However in this case you definatly need to show some placement of where the text is to the image. Is it going to go over the image or on the white area?

The image and text on the left jump out way to much. It draws your eyes away from the image. Soften the left side up and try to create an even focal point that allows your eyes to travel more naturally.

Center the image more. I'd suggest using a warmer colored text since the background is cool.