the boxes are messy i suppose...and colour too bright

Cool .. the overlapping is nice ..the words aint visible but if its suppose to be tt way ..then its ok .. becoz if think the fire is burning and covering the words, it do make sense right..very attractive and do keep ur good work..

the words in the bg aren't very visible.. =/

yoo.. cramp..the color mixture is nice tough.. think you dont over lap.. will be better

the bg makes it way too hard to read.

not bad...